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lexie Disney Member member is offline [ss:Tale as old as time...] Joined: Jun 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 54 Location: kv Karma: 1Could you help me, please? « Thread Started on Jun 10, 2007, 1:39pm »
I'm sorry, I know it isn't graphicc and Disney but it's other stuff and I really need your help. I've written a tale about Ginny Weasley (HP) and I tried to translate it into the English. But I'm not sure... I think I had a lot of mistakes in my tale. Please, could you read it? And tell me what did I wrong? I'll be very pleased! You're my last chance, I don't know other kind people who talk in english. Thank you so so so much! The link for a download is on my site: http://www.potter.is-sparkling.org/cannotstopyourdestinyen.doc Thank youuu!!!
His eyes were closed, his mouth was open, in a sort of smile, like he was in another place, a beautiful place - and that place was me...
heather Administrator member is offline óèð¨#´° ðþ¹µ¬¹¶¬¹·¬¹¸ © Joined: May 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 262 Location: In The Enchanted Forest Karma: 9Re: Could you help me, please? « Reply #1 on Jun 10, 2007, 5:11pm »
I didn't find anything wrong with it dear. I liked it a lot. Congrats! I'm not that poetic, or talented. -- Sorry I moved it, it just seemed to fit here better.
lexie Disney Member member is offline [ss:Tale as old as time...] Joined: Jun 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 54 Location: kv Karma: 1Re: Could you help me, please? « Reply #2 on Jun 11, 2007, 9:22am »
Quote: I didn't find anything wrong with it dear. I liked it a lot. Congrats! I'm not that poetic, or talented. -- Sorry I moved it, it just seemed to fit here better.
Didn't you? Really? Are you sure? :D Well, thank you so much! I'm not talented too, but I like writing, so I try it :) -- It's OK, it's really better here :)
His eyes were closed, his mouth was open, in a sort of smile, like he was in another place, a beautiful place - and that place was me...
cammy GuestRe: Could you help me, please? « Reply #3 on Jun 11, 2007, 11:40am »
well done Lexie
lexie Disney Member member is offline [ss:Tale as old as time...] Joined: Jun 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 54 Location: kv Karma: 1Re: Could you help me, please? « Reply #4 on Jun 12, 2007, 10:43am »
Quote: well done Lexie
thx a lot cammy
His eyes were closed, his mouth was open, in a sort of smile, like he was in another place, a beautiful place - and that place was me...
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